X-Google-Language: ENGLISH,ASCII-7-bit X-Google-Thread: fbb9d,b366fdba6431f3ec X-Google-Attributes: gidfbb9d,public From: Minstrel@vnet.ibm.com (The Minstrel) Subject: Talk-Line: Music staffs Date: 1996/01/12 Message-ID: <4d5n8k$kli@miso.wwa.com>#1/1 X-Deja-AN: 134946106 sender: boba@sashimi.wwa.com references: <4d31l5$1vd@miso.wwa.com> organization: IBM Austin newsgroups: rec.arts.ascii In <4d31l5$1vd@miso.wwa.com>, Rosemary Lyndall Wemm writes: > >On 10 Jan 1996, Bob Allison wrote: > >> For some time I have been using this as a sig in music newsgroups. I >> is the result of many diddlings. >> >> |\ __3__ | >> ____|) ______________|\\ ________| ____________' _| _` __| ________| __| _____ >> ____| ___3_|________@'_\| _|_____| ________|___| _| _| __| |_,@ ___| __| __|__ >> ___/|. __-_|___| _______| _|_____| __,@ ___|__@'_@'_@'___| |_| ___@'___| __|__ >> __( ( ) _4_|___| ______@'__|____O'___| ____|____________@'_|_| _______@'___|__ >> ___`|'_____|___| __________|_________| ____|_______________|_| ____________|__ >> (| O' | boba@wwa.com > > [Snip] >Firstly, your bars do not all contain the equivalent of three crotchets: > > BAR No. CONTENTS BEATS > __ > | | | > 1 O' @' @' = 3 This seems to actually contain 2.5 beats (they look like semi-quavers to me) [Snip] > >Secondly, it is illegal to leap over the octave in a melodic line, >especially when the interval is a ninth and it is not resolved onto the >octave immediately. > These are the rules for (generally) writing four-part (or similar) _vocal_ harmony (simply because it is difficult to sing!). Otherwise, there's not a great problem - besides which, the rules were only originally devised so that examiners had something to assess papers by... >Thirdly, the piece is written in A minor and you have failed to include a >G# in the key signature. If it was, in fact, written in A Minor (and admittedly it does seem like it), the G# would not be in the key signature at all, but only exist as an accidental... > >Fourthly, except for the initial minum, all the notes come from the tonic >chord. > >Fifthly, speaking of the initial mimum, which we were, it comes on a >strong beat but the pitch is not a member of the tonic, or even of the >dominant chord. > [Minim] Again, if it is actually in A Minor. >Fifthly, you repeat notes across the bar line without ties. So? >Seventhly, as a somewhat minor point [since we were talking about minor >things), your melody has even less melodic merit than Gregorian Chant. I cannot disagree with this...! >How about the following for slightly more meritorious compositions? > >The Blue Da-nube: > Hmm... I've never been one for Strauss - I think I'll stick with Bob's in preference ;-) > > Original compost-ition. > Now, that's not bad. I would post something of my own, but I can't get any of it to look right in ASCII.... None of the above comments are intended to cause offense - in fact, I would be quite eager to discuss any gaps in my knowledge that are probably horribly obvious in all that I've said... Yours, striving for perfection, S Who C Wants to O Live Forever? P (Content in the knowledge that he's posting to completely the wrong Newsgroup. Ah, well...)