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(application) The lone survivor [Pending]
By: Ryanrider Date: February 12, 2013, 1:59 pm
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It was a misty night as I looked out my window, it seemed like
the night was calm,but misty. Through the mist I could see, or
at least I thought I could see, a small flicker of a flame, what
was happening among all that mist, what mysterious fire could
there possibly be? What? What was lurking out there? There was
only one way to find out.
As I awoke the next morning, I felt the wind breeze into my
face. Once I was ready for the day ahead, my family and I walked
out the door, but as soon as we did so, a huge outburst of what
seemed to be fear came among us! What was happening? We (or
rather I) was about to find out.
We began to cautiously stroll around the outside of the forest
where the devestating cry had come from.
All of a sudden, we heard yet another outburst from the same
area, this was getting far too suspicious now, I had to know who
was making them and why! When my family weren't looking, I
darted into the forest.
As soon as I ventured deep into the forest, I remembered the
rumors, according to them, no one had ever survived in there! I
could see where all those people had gone. On the floor, they
lay there as lifeless skeletons. Woukd the same fate await me?
This was getting far too freaky now, I took a glance at my
surrounding but there was no sign of life, was I the only one
here? The lone survivor?
I wandered around the deadly forest more when I heard a deep
voice coming from the bushes, I instantly leapt to my guard as
the rustling grew louder and louder, who was hiding among the
bushes? As the sound reached it's ultimate peak, a man, in his
mid thirties from what I could tell came stumbling out muttering
curses under his breath.
When he noticed me, he got a fright when he examined my height
wondering why
I was here which he did eventually ask.
"Hey kid, what are you doing in this forest, haven't you heard
the rumors?" Of course I had to be honest so I replied saying I
dashed here after I heard an uproar of fear.
"Not the smartest move kid." I could tell by the deep tone in
his voice he was less than impressed.
"You look like you could do with a hand, follow me." He beckoned
me over to what seemed to be a survival camp, it was obviously
well built I told him.
"Thanks, it took a few months, yeah I've been here that
lo......." A gunshot came from the distance and a bullet darted
straight through my new guide's face!
He was gone, along with all those others. I dashed through the
woods ducking and leaping, over and under. If I stopped, I would
go down with him. Ten minutes of action and I had entered a open
patch of land. I studied my surroundings, I caught a glimpse of
light! This was it! After weeks in the woods, my family awaited
me.
I darted out the woods, I was facinated at the sound of the cars
go by! I crouched on the pavement, in tears of joy praising God
that I escaped un harmed. I slowly dragged myself to my front
door, it was already open? What was happening now? As I walked
in, one light went on then another then....
I felt sudden figures grasp me. It wasn't bad, it was my family
glad to see me which I expected.
If I ever have to cope with something that difficult again, I
won't survive. Now, time to.......
"Ahhhhh!!" Again!? I heard a uproar of laughter, it was my
brother. Haha very funny.
The End
Its too long isn't it
#Post#: 5110--------------------------------------------------
Re: (application) The lone survivor
By: bob123f Date: February 12, 2013, 4:21 pm
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Yep. :P
I really liked this story. If it wasn't over the maximum=500
words, I would have accepted it. Sorry. You may reapply on Feb.
23rd.
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Re: (application) The lone survivor [Denied]
By: Ryanrider Date: February 13, 2013, 11:09 am
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This isn't officail yet, I'm still waiting to aply, I've posted
this so I can cooy this later.
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Re: (application) The lone survivor [Denied]
By: Ryanrider Date: February 13, 2013, 11:19 am
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637.....
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Re: (application) The lone survivor [Denied]
By: bob123f Date: February 13, 2013, 1:36 pm
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[quote author=Coldblooded link=topic=438.msg5112#msg5112
date=1360775956]
637.....
[/quote] No, 638. I'll have to think this application over...
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