[HN Gopher] Encouraging a culture of written communication ___________________________________________________________________ Encouraging a culture of written communication Author : quintencls Score : 369 points Date : 2020-05-11 12:29 UTC (10 hours ago) (HTM) web link (www.mcls.io) (TXT) w3m dump (www.mcls.io) | letientai299 wrote: | In the software industry, these are several problems that prevent | the success of written communication culture: | | - Most of the dev are not trained for that. They're trained for | finding shortcuts (Google, SO), rushing the deadline and fix the | code with any solution they can find. People tend to follow the | easy path (fix and forget) rather take time to write good docs | (code comment, commit message, wiki, ...) | | - Some people have good writing skills, some have good technical | skills. The ones who are good at both are rare. So some time the | docs are confusing, misleading. | | - We're lacking good tooling for writing docs. At my work, people | prefer to write on Confluence for its inline-comment feature | (before, they write in Google docs). But Confluence (and Google | docs), IMO, are terrible editors for technical heavy docs and | they can't work offline, don't have desktop, can't be used with | external editor (I'm a die hard vim fan). Another example: tools | for drawing diagram. The plain text solutions (PlainUML, mermaid) | I've tried so far don't work well for big diagrams. The non plain | text solutions can't be tracked in git, thus defeat the point of | single source trust. | | I believe if someone can build a product solve my points on | tooling, their product will beat Confluence easily. I don't have | any ideas to fix the other 2 points, though. | MeetingsBrowser wrote: | > Some people have good writing skills, some have good | technical skills. The ones who are good at both are rare. | | Anecdotal, but in my limited experience those with poor writing | skills are also poor at writing software. | | Typically those who have put in the effort to design and | understand their solution are also pretty good at communicating | their changes. | | The people who rush to get things done quickly and have trouble | communicating their changes tend to (in my experience) not | really understand what they are doing themselves. More often | than not in my experience this group of developers mostly | implement ad-hoc solutions that eventually have to be fixed up | by the "good at communicating" group later. | gumby wrote: | > Some people have good writing skills, some have good | technical skills. The ones who are good at both are rare. | | In my experience this is not the case: good programmers are | typically good writers. I think it's due to clarity of | organization and of understanding "the problem to be solved" | letientai299 wrote: | I got the opposite experience. People with good technical | skills often write dense, skip explaination of topics that | they find easy to grasp, assuming the reader also find them | easy (which usually is not the case). | bradlys wrote: | Eh - I find those people are often the same ones who write | weirdly dense pythonic one-liners (cause less lines == | good), don't write documentation for their code (cause all | code they write == self-documenting), and assume that their | interpretation of the English language is standard (even | though it's often enough not their native language). | SamuelAdams wrote: | I used to do this too - write dense essays and | documentation that took forever to read. Then I took a | class on business writing at my local university. It was | well worth the time. It helped me focus on writing short, | terse language that was simple and quick for the reader. If | your organization does struggle with producing easy, well | written communications I would highly encourage considering | they enroll in some sort of 12-week long course with an | experienced instructor who can provide direct feedback. | zwieback wrote: | I would agree, I've worked with scientists and all types of | engineers for decades and I think scientists used to rigorous | lab work and coders tend to be better writers although it's | not a super strong correlation. | sub7 wrote: | As a developer, nothing sounds worse than a bunch of people | typefarting and expecting everyone else to read their stupid | thoughts. | | If you want to type, please do it in an IDE. | [deleted] | m1117 wrote: | It has a huge downside. It can be boring and too corporate. | nlawalker wrote: | I love this topic! A couple of unconnected thoughts on it: | | I think one thing that's needed to establish a culture of written | communication is getting rid of any cultural elements that allow | people to use the _avoidance_ of reading and writing as an | expression of power. You can frequently determine the balance of | power between any two people in an organization by seeing which | one has to read and prepare organized documents and | presentations, and which one can simply speak and be spoken to. | People want to paint pictures of themselves as being able to | synthesize knowledge and ideas instantly, utter commands in real | time and see them turned into action. In the other direction, | they have no time for reading - you must request an audience with | them and survive their real-time verbal sparring and probing | questions to have your ideas received and considered. | | My other musing on this is that I've always wondered if there | would be value in teams establishing an internship or low/mid | level position for a technical writer to serve as a _team | librarian_. "Easy to search" is good, but "search" itself is not | sufficient for many situations - what you need is a person who | can answer questions while taking context into account. If I was | running a technical team, I'd love to experiment with hiring | someone whose primary accountability is _answering everyone else | 's questions_, not generating output. In the same way that a good | dev needs to organize their workspace and build tools/scripts to | be successful, this person will end up organizing the team's | information to better accomplish their job. | karatestomp wrote: | > My other musing on this is that I've always wondered if there | would be value in teams establishing an internship or low/mid | level position for a technical writer to serve as a team | librarian. | | > what you need is a person who can answer questions while | taking context into account. | | A secretary. Teams need a secretary. Also to help wrangle the | explosion of communication tools developers have to use these | days. | | I think a lot of inefficiency and wasted developer-brain- | bandwidth on development teams could be solved with | secretaries. But I've never seen it done. Probably part of the | "with computers everyone _can_ DIY their secretarial work, so | now they _must_ " and the shift (even farther) into secretaries | being a status symbol more than anything else, and god knows we | mustn't let developers have status (pay yes, status... oh hell | no). | thu2111 wrote: | Secretaries were and still are generic, unspecialised | workers. I think the 'team librarian' idea assumes some level | of technical knowledge. | | When I think of my own company, such a person would ideally | be tasked with reading the user guides of the tools we use | and quickly answering questions of the form "can we do this | with it?", amongst other things. | | This article is good but like others it focuses on the | problem of getting people to write. I've found it's much | harder to get people to read. The dirty secret of most | workplaces is the massive disparities in reading speed that | exist and the subtle tensions that can cause. It's something | myself and my manager have both wrestled with, as we both | read much faster than some of the other less technical people | in the firm, and thus don't think much of dropping a six page | memo on people or having long/complex discussions on Slack. | Then they get frustrated at the implied expectation | (sometimes that they put on themselves) to read it all. | karatestomp wrote: | > Secretaries were and still are generic, unspecialised | workers. | | Not at all! They'd often have to train in procedures and | lingo for various occupations, so they wouldn't screw it up | and could be maximally useful. Medical secretaries, for | example, were once a pretty big occupation (I'm sure they | still exist, but there were once _lots_ of them) and they | absolutely had to train in e.g. medicine names and greek | and latin prefixes and meanings (beyond just mega- or | whatever). Secretarial training, often with a focus on an | in-demand field, used to be something community and junior | colleges offered. "Some level of technical knowledge" is | consistent with the role secretaries used to perform and | the skills they used to have, in many cases, at least when | "secretary" didn't mean "door and phone answerer". Acting | as an advanced, human file search and process figurer-outer | ("can we do this with it?") was also part of their role, | coming with the territory of being responsible for filing | (and often for producing the documents being filed in the | first place). | | If we have to go with "team librarian" for | language/marketing reasons I'm still on-board, but | "secretary" would be a fine label. That their often | possessing significant domain knowledge not just as a side- | effect of employment & experience but as part of their | training is (perhaps?) no longer common knowledge is a sign | of how far out of favor real professional-secretarial (that | is, secretary to professionals) roles have fallen, I guess. | klenwell wrote: | I love this topic, too. And this is so true: | | > I think one thing that's needed to establish a culture of | written communication is getting rid of any cultural elements | that allow people to use the avoidance of reading and writing | as an expression of power. | | I'm not in love of the idea of assigning a team librarian or | scribe. I really want it to be part of the culture. Up to the | executives. But if someone could demonstrate it works (and how | it works), I could be persuaded. | | One rule I try to impress on my team: you should be answering | common questions whenever you can with a URL rather than a wall | of text. That URL can link to a wall of text (or hopefully | something a little better structured). Ideally in our wiki. | That beats eight different people answering the question eight | different ways. Or the same person answering it eight times in | slightly different ways. | toast0 wrote: | If you want to have ok documentation, making everyone do it, | can work. If you want to have great documentation, it's hard. | | Very few people are going to be great at solving problems, | great at expressing that in new code, great at maintaining | existing code, great at debugging, great at testing, great at | deployment, and great at documentation. | | Specialization makes a lot of sense in many contexts, and | writing documentation is one of them. | dcminter wrote: | > I've always wondered if there would be value in teams | establishing an internship or low/mid level position for a | technical writer to serve as a team librarian. | | If I remember rightly, this is actually one of the core ideas | in The Mythical Man Month. | L_Rahman wrote: | Half of the reason I want to run my own company is build this | culture and hire that role. The team librarian position is | probably the single best value for money multiplier possible on | team productivity and yet almost no one wants to invest in it. | | That's even before we get into second order effects of building | new pathways into technology work. | wnevets wrote: | >You can frequently determine the balance of power between any | two people in an organization by seeing which one has to read | and prepare organized documents and presentations, and which | one can simply speak and be spoken to. People want to paint | pictures of themselves as being able to synthesize knowledge | and ideas instantly, utter commands in real time and see them | turned into action. In the other direction, they have no time | for reading - you must request an audience with them and | survive their real-time verbal sparring and probing questions | to have your ideas received and considered. | | What if I'm just bad with the async nature of slack and/or | email? If I had a nickel for everytime a long drawn out back | and forth email thread that was resolved in less than two | minutes with a face to face conversion and a white board I | would have a shit load of nickels. | aspaceman wrote: | If after "resolving" something you can't actually write down | what was accomplished, nothing was resolved. | | I've had a lot of 1on1s meant to "get us all on the same | page" where a boss just blithers and blathers for an hour | without communicating anything. The value in writing is | working through the mistakes your brain makes during | communication. Going to talking just makes it easier to | ignore errors. | mandelbrotwurst wrote: | > If after "resolving" something you can't actually write | down what was accomplished, nothing was resolved. | | It's possible to "resolve" something / determine what to do | next without writing anything down. | | Often the ideal outcome is simply an agreement that Person | X will move forward with approach Y. | cmwelsh wrote: | On my last team that would result in a JIRA ticket | containing the details so approach Y was documented and | the reasons behind it were recorded. Then the ticket is | assigned to Person X and they go ahead with the work. | wnevets wrote: | >Often the ideal outcome is simply an agreement that | Person X will move forward with approach Y. | | Which you can write down if you so desire. | mandelbrotwurst wrote: | I would go as far as to argue that this isn't just your being | "bad with" async but rather an inherent drawback of async: | namely that it requires way more context switching! | hadsed wrote: | I would say often times this does and should lie with the | senior folks on a team. They're the ones who must be able to | communicate well since their impact should be broader, perhaps | even outside the team. And they should be scaling the team with | their own knowledge and experience. I know it's a little | different than what you're getting at but i think one person | can do both. | gregmac wrote: | > I'd love to experiment with hiring someone whose primary | accountability is answering everyone else's questions, not | generating output | | It's an interesting idea, but I think the problem is that | someone who can do this role (the intersection of technical | competence and desire) is going to be exceedingly difficult to | find or may not exist at all. | | Someone that's going to be capable of providing useful answers | to developer questions is likely to be a developer themselves, | and almost certainly they're not going to stick around in that | position for long. Part of being an effective "librarian" in | this way is going to be knowing where to go to get a specific | answer -- the existence of specific documentation, which | group/team/person is responsible for which component, the | levels of expertise of people on teams so you can immediately | contact the lowest level person capable of answering, and | eventually just knowing answers yourself. All of that comes | with time, and if you have high turnover this isn't going to | happen. | | Also, someone that does the role poorly is going to be worse | than nothing: unnecessarily bothering others for (maybe the | wrong) information, providing incorrect answers, and/or making | incomprehensible documentation. My guess is it's probably hard | to judge someone's performance at this until they've been doing | it for _at least_ a couple weeks. If you also have high | turnover, you _will_ end up with people not suited for this | role. | [deleted] | philwelch wrote: | > I think one thing that's needed to establish a culture of | written communication is getting rid of any cultural elements | that allow people to use the avoidance of reading and writing | as an expression of power. You can frequently determine the | balance of power between any two people in an organization by | seeing which one has to read and prepare organized documents | and presentations, and which one can simply speak and be spoken | to. | | This is perverse and contemptible in the 21st century. It | reminds me of the line from the Simpsons movie: "I was elected | to lead, not to read". But it goes to show that any cultural | change needs to come from the top in order to be effective. | maxwelljoslyn wrote: | I would _love_ to do this kind of work. Aside from a general | passion for writing and editing, I enjoy describing problems, | characterizing existing solutions ' strengths and weaknesses, | writing docs and user instructions, organizing information, | etc. I'm a good enough developer to build useful tools and work | with more senior engineers, and my favorite part of working in | scientific research was being a force-multiplier and hindrance- | destroyer so subject-matter experts could focus on using their | skills. | | If anyone reading this is in a position to hire for a | "technical writer/librarian/secretary/developer assistant," | click my username and send me an email. We can try a short-term | contract and see how it goes. | aspaceman wrote: | Yeah same honestly. I don't like producing a ton of code, but | I'm good with tech and more complicated stuff like memory | management. I think I could be very helpful just answering | folks questions - I feel that's mostly what I do anyways. | kahmeal wrote: | This, to me, defines the heart of a true DevOps mindset. It's | not easy to find this role defined as such, though, and | you'll often find yourself fighting to carve it out of a more | simplistic definition (i.e. automate stuff) at most | organizations if you choose to pursue the path. | d23 wrote: | Another insidious motive for the avoidance of writing: keeping | things off the record. | | Writing requires you to put your name on your ideas. It | promotes other pro-social traits, like being vulnerable. It's a | lot harder to do negative politics if you're required to take | your claims to paper. It's a lot harder to spread | misinformation if you have other folks in the organization that | can easily go look up your claims and fact check them. | | Taking everything "offline" is a great way to bully, lie, | cheat, and steal without fear of accountability. It hides | incompetence. Weak leaders avoid writing lest they be exposed. | MattGaiser wrote: | > As much as possible, encourage people to post anything of | interest to the public channels. Notice that I'm saying public | channels, and not private messages, because we don't ping anyone | unless it's necessary. We just want to make the information | available. | | That makes it technically available, but also less accessible | than a paper Encyclopedia Britannica. Are people actually going | to try and search through the Slack channel for a solution or are | they going to continue asking their co-worker in a private chat? | Alex3917 wrote: | > As much as possible, encourage people to post anything of | interest to the public channels. Notice that I'm saying public | channels, and not private messages, because we don't ping anyone | unless it's necessary. We just want to make the information | available. | | This. Every time you send a private message is Slack or send an | email to just one other person, it's like taking a $100 bill and | lighting it on fire. | | Just because only one other person needs that information right | now doesn't mean that in a couple years some new hire won't spend | six months just staring at their monitor and not writing code | because they can't figure out wtf is going on. | dragonwriter wrote: | > Every time you send a private message is Slack or send an | email to just one other person, it's like taking a $100 bill | and lighting it on fire. | | Maybe, but with a public channel, it's a stack of $100 bills, | for the time of everyone who doesn't need it now and won't | recall it or be able to find it when they do. | | "Spam everything to the public channel" is the equivalent of | "send everything you find interesting to the All Staff email | distribution list". | | There's good ways of preserving information that multiple | people on a team are going to need at different points of time | in the future, but posting them to a public Slack channel is | pretty far from the target. | | A team wiki is among the many better options. | seqastian wrote: | A wiki is only as good as the big picture and structure of | the people feeding it. Maybe you could use the logs of a chat | to feed into a wiki. Just having everyone edit away with that | ever is on their plate today, sure sounds like a wiki I don't | want to use. | dragonwriter wrote: | > A wiki is only as good as the big picture and structure | of the people feeding it | | Yes, a wiki is very much imperfect. | | It's still much better than a public Slack channel, which | faces the same limits plus additional ones as it cannot | represent the knowledge of big picture structure held by | the people feeding it. | zozbot234 wrote: | A private Q&A facility might be a useful middle ground. | Then use the most frequently referenced topics in the Q&A | as a guide to structuring a wiki. | dllthomas wrote: | Something that was done at a previous company I was at was to | dedicate a rarely used emoji reaction (IIRC, :eject:) to mean | "this information should be captured somewhere other than | slack. Messages that got that response would automatically be | sent to a special channel, where they could be marked as | complete. It worked okay. | Alex3917 wrote: | > A team wiki is among the many better options. | | Wikis are generally useless unless you have people whose job | responsibilities explicitly include creating content for them | and keeping them up-to-date. In my experience, if you have | your PMs do this then each PM can cover 8 - 12 developers. | Whereas if your PMs are just creating and pointing tickets | but not also spending a good percentage of their time on | longterm documentation, they can cover more like 12 - 16 | developers. | | Well maintained wikis are fantastic, but you almost never | find them because for even a mid-size startup that costs | hundreds of thousands or millions of dollars per year. That's | the reason for public mailing lists and other email archival | products, because you're getting _most_ of the value a well- | maintained wiki but with mainly only the nominal cost of | paying for the software to keep it running. | | I've thought a lot about this (obviously, given FWD:Everyone | is in this space), and figured out the actual reason why | email is so much better than Slack for knowledge retention; | it's because with email you're forced to create the metadata | before having the discussion, and then the discussion keeps | going until people no longer have anything to say that | matches the metadata -- subject, participants, visibility | level, etc. (Discussions occasionally go off the rails, but | less than 5% of the time as long as the organization provides | some basic guidance on expectations for communication.) This | metadata is key though because not only does it help you find | what you need to do your job, but it helps you figure out | what you don't need to read, which is perhaps even more | important. | | Whereas with Slack you just start talking, and their software | tries to figure out what you were talking about after the | fact. But despite having an AI team working on this and | having invested millions and millions of dollars into the | problem, their software doesn't really work at all, most | likely because the problem is basically impossible to do a | good job of solving from a computer science perspective. | | edit: Obligatory self-promotional link: | https://www.fwdeveryone.com | mariodiana wrote: | Years ago I tried implementing a wiki at work as a | knowledge base. While the user base remained reserved to | select members of the team, everything was great. But the | success of the wiki then became an invitation to the rest | of the company. And soon knuckleheads were simply uploading | Word documents to the wiki. So, instead of getting | transparent, searchable content, we reverted to | /index.html, circa 1992. | eitland wrote: | > it's like taking a $100 bill and lighting it on fire. | | Interesting example, appreciated! | | Let me try to improve it: | | _it 's like taking an envelope that might or might not contain | an $100 bill and lighting it on fire._ | | Not everything is useful, but we don't know until later. | | Also, the company doesn't get that $100 bill right away, only | if they can dig it out 2 years later. | | Still, good example. | Alex3917 wrote: | > the company doesn't get that $100 bill right away, only if | they can dig it out 2 years later. | | There's a fundamental tradeoff between the percentage of | communication that gets captured and the usefulness of | search. We take the position that email threads shouldn't be | archived unless someone flags them to be saved, on the | assumption that for most employees there are only a couple | dozen (if that) really important email threads being created | per year. | | But the value preserving this knowledge can be extremely | high. E.g. most SaaS startups are built in part by wiring | together a few third-party APIs, and the process of | partnering and integrating with those third parties often | involves email threads with hundreds of messages back and | forth. If those threads get lost because the person leaves | the company then that becomes extremely problematic. | eitland wrote: | > We take the position that email threads shouldn't be | archived unless someone flags them to be saved, on the | assumption that for most employees there are only a couple | dozen (if that) really important email threads being | created per year. | | This probably differs from team to team | | I'm more or less sure I have been saved more than once by | people who didn't tidy up after themselves and so left | information behind even when they planned to remove it. | Sometimes the reason seemed to be that people didn't care, | on other cases it seemed like a way to try to keep | knowledge for themselves. | | In those cases we would have been much better off if the | default wasn't one-to-one. Not because they wouldn't have | tried to circumvent it but because it would slip up more | often. | | (Of course the real problem on such places is the culture | though.) | benhurmarcel wrote: | My company has been pushing for years the idea to limit the | number of recipients to each email you send, simply because | people spend so much time reading and managing email. | smaddox wrote: | Does posting it in a public channel really help solve that | problem, though? With a powerful enough search method, maybe. | But does Slack search qualify? | noisem4ker wrote: | I've found Slack search to be impressive in a multi-thousand | people workspace. Results came up very fast and well | summarized. | munchbunny wrote: | From experience, no. | | The problem with team chat is that it has very low signal to | noise ratio, which makes it hard to find structured info. | CPLX wrote: | As someone who is extremely supportive of the concept of | creating a culture of written communication I have to say I've | had a pretty hard time understanding why people think slack or | other similar chat-style communication even qualifies. | | Don't get me wrong Slack is super useful, and I use it to | communicate with my team all the time. But I don't think | searching old chat messages is a good experience _at all_ and I | don 't even think it even really qualifies as a solution to the | concept in this article. | | To me a culture of written communication involves actually | spending the necessary time to write down explanatory copy that | helps inform other people. That could be things like comments | in code, annotations or instructions for a commonly used | document, detailed proposal or recommendation memos, FAQ's, | guides to how processes work, and so on. | | There's this theory that this information already exists and | the goal is to _capture_ it. I 'm not so sure, my suspicion is | that you have to put in work to _create_ it if you want to see | real results. | MattGaiser wrote: | Wouldn't that still need curating to be useful? | | Sure, you can dump a ton of stuff into the public Slack | channel, but it turns into a mess of wrong stuff, disjointed | ideas, hypothetical chatter, and unanswered questions. | | People are still going to ask someone else rather than trying | to go through that hairball. | | My team probably has half our knowledge in our general dev chat | on Teams. Nobody even tried to use that. | mattbk1 wrote: | Posting public questions can be a very fast way to find the | "someone else" to ask, in my experience. | munchbunny wrote: | _My team probably has half our knowledge in our general dev | chat on Teams. Nobody even tried to use that._ | | Same, my team probably has most of our knowledge buried among | the various document repos and wikis, but it's all at varying | levels of out of date between a few days and a few years. | | The core of the problem, I think, is that the digesting and | organizing of information has to happen _somewhere_. If you | want to make it easy to dump info for the future, then you | make it low friction to write it, but because nobody 's | taking time to organize it, it's going to be a pain for | future readers to glean useful insight from it. On the other | hand, if you require the writers to organize the info and | occasionally update obsolete articles, it'll be much more | useful for future readers, but it'll be much harder to | contribute info in the first place. | | IMO the next big win on this problem will be whenever someone | comes up with an actually good search engine to organize this | sort of team info. Stack Overflow did a great job with public | info by relying on Google for search, but there isn't really | an equivalent for internal info. If we have this, we can rely | a bit more on automation to reduce the amount of organizing | the writers need to do in order to produce usable | documentation. | Cthulhu_ wrote: | You're assuming the new hire will be able to process all | information and - if I'm reading your comment correctly - read | all messages and / or e-mails sent to everyone. That's unlikely | and unreasonable, nobody has the energy to trudge through all | information when they join a new company. | | Instead, make sure you have a good onboarding procedure. | Documentation is important, but categorize it in e.g. a wiki | with a solid landing page, so that new hires can get up to | speed quickly on the one hand, and know where to find | information relevant to what they need to know on the other. | | I've been at my current company for nearly six months now and I | feel like I've barely scratched the surface in the application | (which was started eight years ago, but built on top of two | more decades of domain specific knowledge and platforms). | Alex3917 wrote: | > You're assuming the new hire will be able to process all | information and - if I'm reading your comment correctly - | read all messages and / or e-mails sent to everyone. | | No, just that they'll search for whatever information they | need to do their jobs within the company's archived email. | The nice thing about email is that each message is dated and | comes with the author and the author's contact info, so you | know exactly who to ask if they're still at the company. (And | if they're not at the company, you can ask if you're allowed | to contact them depending on the context, or at least figure | out who they worked with.) | alohaandmahalo wrote: | GitLab team member here. Written communication is vital in a | remote company, and makes all types of companies operate more | transparently and efficiently. | | At GitLab, we don't just document to document. Instead, we | recommend a "handbook-first" approach, which we outline here in | our public handbook: | https://about.gitlab.com/company/culture/all-remote/handbook... | | We're also articulate about what we expect in terms of writing | style guidelines, part of our Communications handbook: | https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/communication/#writing-sty... | MeetingsBrowser wrote: | This is a great resource! I hope I can convince my team to | implement something similar. | | I see that the handbook is mostly focused on company level | procedures and "What we do". Doe GitLab folow similar | principles for documenting code? E.g. Update the documentation | for the design before writing code? | sytse wrote: | Not yet, I'm advocating that our issues for new features | should read like the eventual text in the release post. | benhurmarcel wrote: | Great resources, thank you. This is remarkable that this is | public. | lazyant wrote: | I'd add: keep a simple text or markdown file with daily notes. | cborenstein wrote: | Awesome piece, thanks for sharing. I agree that the key to | effective communication is to lower the barrier to writing things | down. | | In that vein, this piece is missing one thing. It is inherently | easier to write something private than to write something shared. | | Think of how often you jot things down in Apple Notes, Sublime, | etc. as opposed to in your shared space with your team. | | A culture of written communication starts with personal (un- | shared) notes. | | I'm one of the creators of bytebase.io, a notes app that helps | people write low-friction, private notes and quickly share with | teammates when relevant. | rectang wrote: | I think this article puts the cart before the horse. What's the | point of good writing? Can you eat it? As argued at | https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=23147248 the goal ought to | be _effective remote collaboration_. | | I agree with all the child comments questioning whether you can | or should inculcate writing skills -- they're only one path to | success. People with passable or subpar writing skills can find | other paths. | simonw wrote: | Related challenge: encouraging a culture of reading. | | I've invested a great deal of effort in writing documents in the | past only to realize that very few co-workers were taking the | time to read what I'd written. | | There are workarounds for this. The most famous I can think of is | the Amazon culture where each meeting starts with 10 minutes of | quiet reading, to ensure everyone is on the same page. | | I imagine it's part of a writing culture though. Once people | understand that an organization values writing, they'll take the | time to read. | lifeisstillgood wrote: | I have started making videos for people to watch (mostly me | doing voiceover a screencast). It has had varying reactions, | but I think it is becoming a valid medium. | | I suspect however I would put it in the category of 'I saw a | tweet about the film of the book' for descending levels of | nuance (but increasing levels of getting the point across) | grogenaut wrote: | My main problem with videos and audio recording is they take | so long to do. I made one for training at work and it's had | high payback, but it's also around an hour of time per minute | of content. | blattimwind wrote: | They take a long time to produce and to consume as well. | Video is a neat but inefficient form of communication for a | lot of content. | msla wrote: | Video is good for brief pieces unless the whole point is | to evoke emotion. Are you Spielberg? Are you going for | Best Picture? Then keep your video very short. It isn't | searchable, it moves at one speed regardless of how the | audience is doing, and there's no way to copy text out of | it so I can search for more information. It can't be | cross-referenced, it can barely be indexed, and the text | it contains can't be reformatted, unless I'm applying the | formatting to subtitles which live in a separate file, in | which case I'm _really_ interacting with a text document | after all, innit? | ozim wrote: | Look at pluralsight, everyone should be able to run video | on 2x speed. One hour explanation I can watch in 30 | minutes. If it would be written I could skim even faster | and read interesting parts... But people don't read that is | the problem. | JoshuaDavid wrote: | Another related challenge: encouraging a culture of there being | a predictable and searchable place documents live, so when | someone has written a document you can actually find it. | gen220 wrote: | We're experimenting with putting our documentation in our | monorepo (written in markdown, compiled and published to | GDrive, Confluence, if god-help-you you're searching on one | of those platforms). Nitty-gritty api documentation lives in | the service's protobuf file, but "evergreen" architecture | overviews and technical designs live in the repo. | | benefits: versioning, code review of docs, portability, | plaintext search tools, docs show up while grepping for code, | can change code and docs in same commit, git blame, you can | "guess" where documentation for a service lives if you know | it's location in the repo. | | downsides: not everyone enjoys learning markdown syntax, it's | a skill orthogonal to communication. eng is a gatekeeper for | changes to documentation, i.e. product can't go through it | and fix typos. our code review tool does not have as good | inline comment-discussion UX as G Docs (biggest one). | simonw wrote: | I love keeping documentation in the same repo as the code, | because you can enforce updates to the relevant | documentation as part of the code review process. "This | change is great - don't forget to update the docs in | docs/blah.md before you land this pull request." | | You can even write unit tests that verify that certain | things are mentioned in the documentation: | https://simonwillison.net/2018/Jul/28/documentation-unit- | tes... | gen220 wrote: | Ooh thank you, unittesting the documentation is a great | tip that I will steal. | | Totally agree, code review is a huge plus for many | reasons. | | If your company/project has a build graph (bazel, pants | etc), you can even make the source file a dependency of | the document, so whenever the source file changes, it's | trivial to generate an automated "hey don't forget to | update <doc> if it's relevant to this change". | andreareina wrote: | Are you copy/pasting the md input into Confluence, the | formatted html output, or doing something else? | gen220 wrote: | We use pants as our build tool, and somebody has | graciously contributed a plugin for pants that generates | confluence pages: https://github.com/pantsbuild/pants/blo | b/master/contrib/conf.... | | Looks like a thin wrapper around the confluence API and a | homebrewed md to html converter, that supports inter- | document links. Looks like most of the code was written | by folks at Twitter. | | Personally, I'd advocate for using pandoc | (https://pandoc.org/) unless a custom solution like this | makes sense and you have the eng resources to | maintain/support it. | | Pandoc will give you a pretty sensible html document by | default, and with some fine-tuning you can make the | outputs look pretty great. | | Pandoc also generates beautiful and customizable latex- | powered pdfs. We have a policy of publishing those to G | Drive every minor version. | specialist wrote: | FWIW, my last team had too much documentation. It's just so | hard to cull stale info. I really struggled to discern what I | could ignore. | | Everything needs a default automatic TTL, just like renewable | leases. | larrik wrote: | I'll put it in Confluence! | | _can never find it again..._ | simonw wrote: | Two approaches I've used for that: | | 1. Having a "doc of docs" for each team - a document (Google | Doc, wiki page, whatever) that acts as an index for all of | the other documentation. If anyone asks "where's the | documentation for X?" the answer should be "It's in the doc- | of-docs. And if it isn't, it's your job to find it and put a | link to it in the doc-of-docs". | | 2. Get a good search engine! I built a search engine for work | that indexed documentation content from 8 different sources, | because building a single search index was easier than | convincing dozens of teams to switch the documentation | solution they were using. I used an improved variant of the | technique I described in https://24ways.org/2018/fast- | autocomplete-search-for-your-we... | specialist wrote: | Maybe also add basic metrics. Like number of views, | popularity over time, sparklines for edit activity, ... | | Maybe even some social features, with a decay rate. So | teammates recently tagging things as "helpful!" could nudge | me to pay attention. | | Any additional signal to help noobs like me while foraging. | SamuelAdams wrote: | At that rate you're better off buying some software that | handles all this for you. Enter Microsoft Sharepoint. | Yikes. | simonw wrote: | An idea I had but never really executed on was a | mechanism for tagging documentation as "should be | reviewed at least once every X months" - for things like | setting up developer environments. | | That way a team could be alerted if their documentation | was due-for-review. One person gets assigned a task to | review it. They look through it, update it if necessary, | and either way put a "last reviewed by X on date Y" tag | on it so people who read it can tell that it's still | relevant. | larrik wrote: | > The most famous I can think of is the Amazon culture where | each meeting starts with 10 minutes of quiet reading, to ensure | everyone is on the same page. | | As an American, I've never heard of this, and can't even | imagine it. | strgcmc wrote: | It's not like, 100% adopted at literally every single | meeting, but it's pretty common across Amazon. Some orgs will | do it more religiously than others, but no org will look at | you funny if you request for a 5-10 min doc read before you | start the rest of the meeting. | ryandrake wrote: | (Never worked for Amazon) | | Is it literally a quiet-read time where everyone just sits | there silently reading a shared doc? Or is it what Ive seen | happen in a lot of companies where someone projects the | doc, and walks through it, reading/summarizing it aloud to | attendees. I like to call that activity "executive | storytime", since it's often underlings reading status | reports to execs. | strgcmc wrote: | As the other poster said, it's meant to be silent reading | time. | | Some reasons why (loosely paraphrasing internal guidance | on how to run meetings and why writing culture matters): | | - PowerPoints are lazy/evil, and not good formats for | conveying complex ideas; by nature, PPT's encourage | shallow thinking, and is thus antithetical to the goal of | having rigorous analysis/deep-thinking in making complex | tech/business decisions | | - Docs should stand on their own, without needing to be | presented or walked-through by a person; forcing you to | explain your ideas and support them in such a way that | any sufficiently motivated reader can follow along and | work out what they mean on their own, is again a way to | encourage you to be rigorous and thorough (but limiting | you to 6-pager format, for brevity) | | - Writing long-form paragraphs and full sentences forces | you to take time to refine your ideas | | - Forcing people to take time to digest the doc first, | gives everyone a chance to take notes and formulate | ideas/responses to the info/arguments presented; this | saves a lot of time as compared to, walking through a | doc/slides for the first time, and having a roomful of | people encounter those ideas for the first time and to | ask questions in real time as they encounter them... | reading the doc should hopefully already address the most | common questions/critiques, and so you can spend more | time on 2nd/3rd-order more advanced decisions or | arguments | kevan wrote: | Silent reading time in my experience. 5-10m of a 30m | meeting, and up to 30m for longer design reviews or | program docs. I personally love the format but I know | some people get tired of writing so much. | [deleted] | simonw wrote: | Search for 'Six-Page Narratives' on this shareholder letter | from Bezos for a bit more detail: https://www.sec.gov/Archive | s/edgar/data/1018724/000119312518... | larrik wrote: | Nice, thanks | tracer4201 wrote: | Once you become accustomed to this culture, it's difficult to | go back. At one of my previous companies, there was a | PowerPoint heavy culture. Every meeting had a presenter who | brought PowerPoint slides. There's something to be said about | PowerPoint being boring, but the bigger issue with PowerPoint | culture is that the focus stays on the presenter and whatever | information they provide... questions were typically saved | towards the end. Some presenters who are open to disruption | during their presentation will answer question, but it never | fosters a rigorous, thorough deep dive. | | Instead, using a written document absolutely _forces_ the | presenter /writer to have clarity in thought and it | absolutely requires that they "cut the bullshit" and get to | the point - what matters and what doesn't matter. | | These kinds of meetings will derail if the writer hasn't | fully fleshed out their ideas or even if the document is | missing important structure ... the purpose of the document, | what the author is trying to get out of the meeting ("what is | the success criteria for the document or meeting?"), what's | in scope, if it's a technical document then clarity in | functional requirements, non-functional | requirements/constraints, options/alternatives, trade offs, | and so on. | | In my honest opinion, the document driven meetings provide | Amazon a competitive advantage. | pm90 wrote: | > I imagine it's part of a writing culture though. Once people | understand that an organization values writing, they'll take | the time to read. | | Definitely. I do see a lot of value in understanding what | different teams in my org are working on and am excited to read | about it; I write in a manner that caters to that kind of | audience, to present information in a no-frills, easy to | consume manner so the readers don't feel like they've wasted | any time. | | A good culture of writing is very important to scale; as | companies grow, the tail doesn't know what the head is doing. I | won't harp on some imagined "waste" that can be saved by better | communication; instead better communication simply makes | everyone feel like they're on the same page and | suggest/contribute to the org's growth. That itself is a big | deal. | Alex3917 wrote: | > I've invested a great deal of effort in writing documents in | the past only to realize that very few co-workers were taking | the time to read what I'd written. | | It would be an interesting experiment to visibly prepend the | search queries each employee had done before asking a question | to their actual question, in order to discourage asking | questions before searching for the answer. You said you had | built your own search solution, so clearly you could wire up a | form that actually does this. | SilasX wrote: | It's generally a good practice to start any request with | "what did I do to find the answer/solve the problem?" That's | both a check that you did your homework first and a way to | avoid a bunch of back and forth narrowing down what the other | party needs to give/tell you. | gen220 wrote: | I believe that if you invest in a feedback mechanism for | improving the signal:noise ratio of writing, people are smart | and will naturally gravitate to where signal:noise is the | highest. If people in an org aren't reading, I generally take | it as a signal that documentation is incomplete and misleading, | or the signal:noise ratio is way too low. | | In orgs where the muscle for long-form reading has atrophied | (for the above reasons), you can try to write document to | account for a weak long-form-reading muscle. | | Begin your document with an abstract TLDR and ToC, open each | top-level section with a TLDR paragraph, and provide pointers | that imply the TLDR assertions are supported by evidence (i.e. | internal links to the relevant section). | | The key to good TLDR-writing is terse, in-order parsable | sentences, and short paragraphs (one sentence, maybe two per | paragraph), with tasteful font-weight choices. I'd discourage | using font-weight outside of TLDR's, except maybe to highlight | keywords. | | I think wikipedia is a glowing example of what documentation | should be. Some pages are huge (e.g. | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_War_II), but each section | is dense, and filled with links to more detailed pages. To find | the specific answer to some question, you often only need to | navigate the table of contents and two or three sections/links. | And yet, the pages can also be read straight-through. Writing | like this is a hard skill to earn, but it's reward is probably | a culture of reading. | sqs wrote: | > You should try to have a single source of truth as much as | possible. If you have many places where information can be found, | it will affect both people writing the documentation and those | trying to find it. The writers will have yet another blocker to | just getting stuff written down. The readers won't know where to | look and will have to interrupt people in Slack, as opposed to | referring to the knowledge base themselves. | | Agree x1000 with this point, with emphasis on the point about | readers. The probability that someone will write down an | important piece of information (and will do it well) is | proportional to their perception of the benefit from doing so. If | the would-be author thinks nobody would read it, they won't write | it down in the first place. If they think team members will find | it and read it 1,000 times in the next 3 months, then they're | very likely to write it down. | | > I believe it has to be easy for people to write a document | without having to worry too much about where to put it. | Therefore, I believe it's better to have a tool with good search | functionality rather than investing in having a perfect | information architecture. In the latter case, we're putting up | extra roadblocks for the writer, because then they'll need to | spend extra time figuring out where to put their writing in the | first place. | | To make this work, I think you need to designate certain | documents and locations as sources of truth. If any random Google | Doc that someone drafts can be considered a source of truth, then | gathering the "canonical" information about any topic ("what's | all the customer feedback from Acme Corp?") becomes extremely | difficult, especially to newer team members who haven't fully | internalized the communication practices yet. | | Here's our handbook page that describes what has worked for us | (at Sourcegraph): | https://about.sourcegraph.com/handbook/communication#sources.... | Only very specific Google Docs are sources of truth; all others | are just ephemeral scratchpads. | Koshkin wrote: | > _a single source of truth_ | | Naturally, these have been called "bibles": Unix Bible, Linux | Bible, Linux Command Line and Shell Scripting Bible, etc. | frank2 wrote: | One of the main barriers to writing things down in organizations | is the knowledge that anything written down can be subpoenaed. At | least in the US, management of legal liability is a major part of | running most organizations. | MattGaiser wrote: | How much of what is written day to day by software developers | would be legally interesting? | blueyes wrote: | Posts like this are published with regularity. And like all | things that must be said again and again ("stay off the grass", | "we're in this together"), we can assume the opposite somehow | true: Most teams do not write much or do not write well. | | What posts like this do not address is the root cause of the | problem: Writing is hard. Why is it hard? And how can people | learn to write better? Those would be worthy topics for a longer | post, which are not addressed in this one. | | Writing, like code, takes time to produce and consume. Like a | product with friction in its onboarding, this decreases the | likelihood that many people will ever reach the goal of writing | clearly. | | Unlike code, most people think they _can_ write. But the | difference between writing, and writing clearly, is large. | | Unlike code, almost everyone has been "taught" to write, often by | teachers who themselves do not write well, or do not have time to | truly teach them, so they have a lot of bad habits. These include | a reliance on cliches, ambiguous diction, and poor organization. | The first flaw makes the reader zone out, the second vastly | increases the amount of time it takes to consume and respond to | writing, since the feedback loop is delayed. | | Personally, I do not believe that many people will ever learn to | write well; I also don't think it's worthwhile to make them try. | I think that organizations, in order share information well | internally, should make certain people "writers" who get extract | information from their colleagues and convey it to the team. They | would be like the secretary in a meeting, but more ubiquitous. | This would be part of their job description and KPIs and | compensation. | wonder_er wrote: | > I do not believe that many people will ever learn to write | well; I also don't think it's worthwhile to make them try. | | If you're someone who aspires to write well some day, I think | it's worth drawing a further distinction. /u/blueyes might | agree with this: | | "I do not believe that many people will ever learn to write | well, unless this person believes learning to write well is | worth the effort. If someone doesn't want to learn to write | well, it's not worthwhile to make them try." | | Which means that if _you_, reader, want to write better, it's | worth trying to do so. | | If you don't want to write better, well, you've not read this | far, so don't worry about it. | | edit: grammar x2 It's not easy to write clearly. | ghaff wrote: | >If someone doesn't want to learn to write well, it's not | worthwhile to make them try. | | And they have to be committed to putting the effort/time into | it. Courses are fine--especially for communicating your | organization's style and guidelines. But, for the most part, | good writers write a lot. (Working with a good editor can | help too.) | | If someone sees writing as a real chore they're probably not | going to get very good at it any more than someone who | loathes the sight of a given musical instrument is likely | going to become an expert musician. | moneil971 wrote: | There's a distinction between learning to write well at | length or often -- and learning to write well enough for | clear, concise communication. The former is not something | everyone needs or values. The latter is one everyone should | work on, especially now that we are all communicating via | chat, email, comments, social posts, and other written | methods. Effectively communicating your thought or opinion is | a skill worth honing. | janwillemb wrote: | I'm often surprised by how bad people are able to handle basic | computer stuff. For example: why TF don't you learn yourself | how to type on a keyboard properly to accelerate your typing by | like 10 times. Why TF are you not using the shortcuts your | software is giving you to accelerate like 10 times. | kebman wrote: | I don't worry too much about it. In fact it kinda makes me | happy. It just means your job is now safer, since you DO know | all those shortcuts. ^^ | noisem4ker wrote: | It also results in newer iterations of products and | software losing support for shortcuts and accelerators, | because no one values or knows about them anymore, until | every interface becomes dumbed down and considers touch as | the primary and only possible way of interaction. | EvanAnderson wrote: | _I think that organizations, in order share information well | internally, should make certain people "writers" who get | extract information from their colleagues and convey it to the | team. They would be like the secretary in a meeting, but more | ubiquitous. This would be part of their job description and | KPIs and compensation._ | | I've seen organizations I think would benefit from this kind of | role (both in the technical sector, and outside it). | Unfortunately, it's been void for a long time-- and one that's | not able to be "enabled" by some new technology (meaning that | organizations could have been doing it already if they saw | value in it). I think the long-standing fact that it remains a | void probably means it's an idea that won't ever gain traction. | | I'd love to see some case studies or hear anecdotes about | businesses that either had-but-eliminated such roles, or | businesses that developed such roles. | | I've worked in organizations where talented people handle this | work adjunct to their "real job". I've been amazed and | delighted to be able to refer to documentation in those | organizations where it existed. I've also seen those people | leave and witnessed the product of their work lay fallow and | "rot". | | I've seen some documentation come out of more scientific- | oriented technical industries (think 'Theory of Operation' | texts accompanying old lab instruments) that are just | wonderful. I get a real sense of "we have our stuff together" | when I see that kind of documentation in a Customer-facing | situation, and it gives me a (potentially false, of course) | sense that the manufacturer _really_ knows what they 're doing | if they can bother to produce documentation like that in a | Customer-facing scenario. ("Imagine how good their internal | documentation must be?") Then again, I'm apparently an odd duck | because I get a lot of satisfaction out of creating and using | good documentation. | AlexCoventry wrote: | > Writing is hard. Why is it hard? | | Usually because the underlying ideas are inchoate, so bad | writing is often a good diagnostic for muddy thinking. | gonzo41 wrote: | How often do you use the word inchoate when speaking? | | I think writing is hard for those who's effect can be summed | up as individual contributor. The moment you have to work in | teams with a head count greater than 1m writing and effective | communication become important. It's just people don't really | lean into it like programming. They payoff has a slower | feedback mechanism. | AlexCoventry wrote: | Every couple of months or so, I guess. | lukethomas wrote: | This is a great point. The issue is that the current best | practice advice is to use a wiki. | | Wikis are riddled with problems. They become out of date | quickly. They need a librarian over time to organize the | content in a way that's meaningful. There's also no "habit | loop" to encourage people to regularly contribute content. | | Right now, wikis are a tax on the most productive people in a | company. If someone asks you the same question over and over, | you will eventually document it to share. | | At my company (https://www.friday.app/) we've found a way to | get people to regularly communicate asynchronously via regular | updates like daily standups or weekly status reports. It's more | like a work journal vs. a file cabinet. | munificent wrote: | _> Why is it hard?_ | | It is an incredible mental balancing act when you think about | it. Your goal is to get some information into someone's head. | To do that, you need to actually simulate _their_ brain using | yours. You have to think about _how_ that person learns, what | they already know, and how to incrementally build up your | information in a way that makes sense to them. You have to | think about what words and idioms they 're familiar with, | whether they learn top-down or bottom-up, etc. | | In order to get into their mindset, you have to temporarily | pretend to _not_ know the thing you are explaining. At the same | time, you are explaining it, so you have to simultaneously hold | that very same thing in the forefront of your mind. | | Now consider that each potential reader learns differently and | knows different things so when imagining your audience, you | have to do the whole process above in parallel for a number of | different imagined audiences. | | Doing this well requires a lot of theory of mind skill, and | that's something that I think a lot of technical people are not | very good at. My experience is that a lot of people who are | drawn to tech are that way because they've found it easier to | get along with machines because machines "make sense" and are | simpler, which to me points to less theory of mind ability. | BurningFrog wrote: | > _Doing this well requires a lot of theory of mind skill, | and that 's something that I think a lot of technical people | are not very good at_ | | So very true. | | "Theory of mind" is a good term. "Empathy" is another. | munificent wrote: | It is a good term: | | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Theory_of_mind | | My wife and daughter are on the spectrum and it has been an | interesting (and often difficult) experience to spend a lot | of time around people whose intuitive theory of mind isn't | as strong as a typical person's. | | It made me realize how much we take for granted the | dedicated brain regions we have for social cognition. For | most of us, it's completely effortless to know "Oh, I told | her ___ so she'll want ___." We do that processing as | automatically as we recognize faces or climb stairs with a | cup of coffee in our hands. | | But for people on the spectrum, it's like the wetware is | reduced, like having bad balance or no sense of direction. | They can do the same task _deliberately_ by focusing all of | their attention on it, using the general-purpose calculator | part of their brain to do a job most of us rely on | dedicated hardware for. | | Doing that takes a _lot_ out of them. Imagine if every | conversation felt like a calculus test. When they don 't do | that, it manifests itself in all sorts of behaviorally | strange ways. There's the classic stuff like unusual affect | and eye contact. But the one I notice a lot now that I'm | attuned to it is pronouns. They will often use a pronoun to | refer to a noun they've never introduced, because _they_ | are already thinking of that noun and didn 't notice that | they never mentioned it explicitly. | | Brains are weird. | clairity wrote: | great point. i don't generally buy the argument that coding | is drastically different from writing, insofar as it's laying | out symbols in a way that can be understood (and followed) by | another actor. that's a technical skill that's fairly | transferable between the two. | | but it is drastically different in how it's interpreted by | that other actor: computers are (designed to be) fairly rigid | in interpretation (the frontier of that not being so is | fascinating but in its infancy), so that there's little-to-no | variance in the output. people are completely flexible in | comparison. inputs can generate a wide range of outputs, and | there's little control over that range within the writing | itself. that seems to frustrate many coders. | | even the purpose can vary. coding is generally imperative in | nature: do what i tell you to do. writing is generally | persuasive (here's what i think, why i think it, and why you | should think it too), since it's hard to force the | imperative. | | writing is necessarily harder than coding, because the target | has so much greater complexity. | tra3 wrote: | > i don't generally buy the argument that coding is | drastically different from writing, insofar as it's laying | out symbols in a way that can be understood (and followed) | by another actor. that's a technical skill that's fairly | transferable between the two | | That's a great observation. A bit of a tangent, but I enjoy | writing code with a tight feedback loop. Either with a | debugger, a set of unit tests. | | With writing, the feedback loop is not there. It's not | clear whether the message achieves the desired effect. | | Framing writing this way, explains why it's such a | challenging activity. At least in my mind. | clairity wrote: | yes, another good point. you have to be your own feedback | loop, simulating as many other minds in your head as you | can, as @munificent laid out. it seems that proofreaders | and editors came about to help in that regard. | BurningFrog wrote: | If you write code intending it to have good human | readability - and you _really_ should - you have the same | problem writing code. | | I spend a lot of time rereading my code imagining I'm | someone else who's never seen it before. Not sure | everyone does. | munificent wrote: | _> but it is drastically different in how it 's interpreted | by that other actor: computers are (designed to be) fairly | rigid in interpretation (the frontier of that not being so | is fascinating but in its infancy), so that there's little- | to-no variance in the output._ | | Yes, I like to tell people that English is a programming | language with no official spec and a billion partially | incompatible compilers. | Juliate wrote: | Interesting take. | | Incidentally, the past 30 years have precisely seen the | disappearance, but in very select types of businesses, of | secretary/assistant/aide roles. | hoorayimhelping wrote: | Most writing is written for the purpose of being filed, not | read. It's as simple as that - it takes exponentially more work | to write something that you intend and want people to read. | Most engineers just cannot be bothered with such a menial | "soft" skill - the information should be interesting enough, | right? | | Well, no. I kind of thought my creative writing classes were a | stupid joke at the time, but 15 years after graduating college, | it is very clear that storytelling is one of the most effective | persuasion techniques I've learned or seen. It's an incredibly | effective way of transmitting information - if you can frame | your outage post-mortem like a story with a central conflict, | rising action, a climax and a resolution, you'll find that it | just seems to be repeated and transmitted by itself. Very few | people, even engineers want to read a boring timeline that | dryly lists what happened in sequential order. Lots of people | want to read an adventure starring an engineer who bumbled into | a huge conflict and had to fix it before the business imploded. | | If you find yourself writing things that no one is reading, try | making it more read more like a story. we've all known someone | who could take some mundane thing like going on a date and make | it interesting with a few storytelling techniques. We might | even have a few stories ourselves that we've been crafting over | the years. Think about the techniques you use to tell | interesting stories - misdirection, suspense, shared context | and start applying them to your documents. | | Edit: To clarify: Please don't take the advice that structuring | your documents to be more like a story means write one of those | posts we all groan about constantly that takes a two paragraph | report and turns it into a multipage short story. For God's | sake don't start your post mortem doc like: "It was a sunny day | in March. Birds were chirping. The air was light and airy. As I | poured my coffee into my favorite mug that expressed my | personality in porcelain, I knew something was amiss. Today was | going to be different." Just consider structuring your | documents to be more readable and flowing. | WJW wrote: | Besides the fact that most people are not all that great at | writing, it is also often not to their advantage to write at | all. At worst, they are in an organisation that will offshore | their job at the earliest moment it seems they are easily | replaced. In the more benign and common case, writing a lot is | not directly detrimental to their career but it will not be | that advantageous either. Written documentation is by nature | usually technical in nature and therefore not often read or | noticed by management. It does however take a lot of time to | write, time which can not be spent on the parts of your job | that get measured with KPIs or OKRs or whatever. This means | that spending a lot of time on good documentation will make you | "less productive" according to the measurements you are graded | on for career advancement. I wonder how that would fare if you | have a separate "documentation secretary", since helping those | understand the code you just wrote has the same drawbacks as | working on the documentation yourself. | Viliam1234 wrote: | I imagine one could be part-tester and part-writer. Both the | tester and the documentation writer need to understand how | the application works (at least from user perspective). The | work for testers comes in waves; they could work on | documentation between the waves. It could even make sense to | highlight in user documentation, which parts are already done | and tested, and which are still missing. | | But these days many companies don't even have testers as a | separate position, so... dunno, who else is left, besides | managers and developers? Perhaps the janitors could take some | extra reponsibility. | js8 wrote: | You don't have to be Stephen King to write clear technical | documentation for your fellow teammates. | | I think that people can learn some writing with practice (I | know because I did). But it's like with everything, if you | don't practice, you will never learn. IMHO, this just stresses | the importance of having culture where things are written down. | | I suggest as a starting point, just write as if you were | explaining the subject or code to somebody. Use full sentences, | not bullet points. | TeMPOraL wrote: | I think it's also important to have a culture _of reading_ , | not just writing. Otherewise, nobody will ever know if the | writing is any good. It's like with backups - you don't | actually have one until you've successfully restored your | system from it. | | Onboarding is a good moment for testing a lot of internal | documentation. Instead of getting a senior to help set up a | new hire, give the newcomer a list of Wiki pages and see if | they can set themselves up from it. If they struggle, you'll | know what exactly needs fixing. | mariodiana wrote: | We can't have writing that effects clear communication, because | nearly everyone is too busy, or too important, or has decided | that pretending to be too busy is a way of increasing one's | perceived importance, or all of the aforementioned. So they | dash off sentence fragments, peppered with inflated vocabulary | and buzzwords, and punctuated with ellipses, comma faults, and | worse. | | When the above isn't the case, then you have the people who are | too lazy: they cannot be bothered to simply read over to | themselves what they've written even one time. And when they | aren't merely lazy, then they're simply too dull-witted to | understand the need for this. | | Lastly, you have the people -- perhaps overrepresented in tech | -- who suffer from something like an underdeveloped theory of | mind. On some fundamental level, they don't understand that | what is in their mind is not necessarily in the mind of the | reader; and so they lack Clue Number One as to how to establish | context. | | Writing isn't difficult. People are difficult. | mabbo wrote: | > Writing is hard. Why is it hard? And how can people learn to | write better? Those would be worthy topics for a longer post, | which are not addressed in this one. | | Amazon has a half-day internal course on business writing | because it's taken so seriously. Everyone on the corporate side | is encouraged to take it. This results in better writing, on | average, which lets everyone see the value of good writing. | | It's an investment that pays off. | andrei_says_ wrote: | Do they have any materials available to the public? I vaguely | remember reading about their approach to meetings (written | agenda with context which everyone must read prior etc. ) | screye wrote: | > Writing is hard. Why is it hard ? | | Because not everyone thinks that way things are written. | Depending on the person, translating ideas from the 'brain | medium' to script can be really difficult. | | I love giving presentations with white boards, using visual | structures like graphs. I think if companies becomes more | flexible about allowing teams to document things in a format | that best suits their 'brain medium' then I think a lot more | people would be willing to _' write more'_. I | sl1ck731 wrote: | I work with a lot of people who didn't take the college track | to become what they are today. I'm not saying that college is | necessary or that one way is better or worse than the other, | but the one thing I notice most about them is that they do not | communicate through writing well. | | The single most important thing, in my opinion, that these | folks are missing is they do not write with an audience in | mind. | | Our manager's boss doesn't need long technical emails. | | "javascript|ruby|python developers" should not need | documentation on how "javascript|ruby|python" themselves or | their standard libraries work. There is documentation for that | already, but I have been asked to document such things. | avip wrote: | Writing is half the issue. Most people are not very good | readers, even of well-written material. | chrstphrhrt wrote: | Yep. I've been on a few remote teams where I write a lot (in | plain language too), and have found that if my audience is non- | technical management that they simply don't read it. Decisions | continue to be made on their gut whims despite access to the | critical information. | | I guess that what the article is on about. Writing on its own | isn't enough, the culture must be set top-down to include | reading and value added communications as well. | | I think a lot of workers who do not have a craft per se just | want to coast and pretend to work, and get offended or | embarrassed when they encounter serious contributors that make | them look useless. | | There is an attitude toward the writer of "if you know the | topic so well, then just handle 'it' and get 'it' done". | Unfortunately their idea of "it" has nothing in common with | what is described or advocated in the writings. | ativzzz wrote: | > I've been on a few remote teams where I write a lot (in | plain language too), and have found that if my audience is | non-technical management that they simply don't read it. | Decisions continue to be made on their gut whims despite | access to the critical information. | | It feels like writing in a business context can easily enter | TLDR territory. | | I've often felt like I've had to write walls of text | regarding various things, where it feels like there has to be | a better more efficient way to transfer information between | parties. | | Walls of text work well for technical documentation, not so | much with other things. You want to be concise, but often you | literally cannot be. | | Maybe a tool like Loom can be useful, but personally I hate | watching a video when I can read instead. Maybe others | disagree. | vorpalhex wrote: | > It feels like writing in a business context can easily | enter TLDR territory. | | I frequently actually put "TLDR: Whatever-the-point-is" at | the top of my presentations/write ups, and then use the | paper to actually provide support and pro/cons. | clairity wrote: | that's easily solved by a summary at the beginning of the | document, laying out the premise, the conlusions, and a | short thread connecting the two. | | if you want to get fancy, you can work on organizing the | document itself so that it's easily scanned for pertienent | info (headings, charts, graphs, footnotes, etc.). but as | the oft-quoted twain is said to have said: "I didn't have | time to write you a short letter, so I wrote you a long | one." | thu2111 wrote: | Absolutely this. I've actually seen company founders get | frustrated and upset at waking up and having Slack channels | filled with complex debate that happened over night (even | when they didn't need to read it). Not for any clearly | articulated reason, just a vague feeling that people | shouldn't do that. | | Eventually it came out that a big part of it was: | | 1. Slow reading skills | | 2. Slow typing skills | | With the result that some people felt they just couldn't keep | up in such debates and would thus effectively lose by | default. This was frustrating to the group of us that _could_ | read, write and type quickly because it was basically a | mostly implied request that we stop being good at our jobs. | The thing you say about workers "without a craft per se" | just rings so true to me. | mathattack wrote: | It's hard because the beneficiaries of writing are different | than the writers. It's only in very strong cultures where execs | put a premium on this on measuring talent. "Not only finish | your work, and these three other tasks, but write about it | too." | | Organizations can pull it off if enough people do it long | enough, and they make heroes of the great writers. You see it | in companies that are best in class in talent management. | closeparen wrote: | Why is it so hard? Few are native speakers or passing for it. | Few native speakers took their writing classes seriously, or at | all. Almost no one reads for pleasure. | DenisM wrote: | We're having decent success recording and sharing small video | presentations. People can speak in their own voice, they can | point at things which is sometimes faster than describing them. | | I've always been a stickler for clear writing, but recently I | decided I will settle for effective communication of any form. | aantix wrote: | Writing is premature optimization. | | YouTube is the most important asset on the web. | | In fact, we'd be better off if most "thoughts" weren't committed | to virtual paper. | | In the beginning you want a medium that malleable, nuanced, high | bandwidth. Speech. Visual emotion. Voice inflection. How we've | evolved. | | It's in those moments where ideas are challenged sbd change form | quickly. | | Then once they're a bit more solidified, take a pass at writing. | Which adds further clarity. | | I think eventually we find a place again for voice and video for | remote work. Something that isn't a huge production but still | async. | | Yac or Loom look really promising in this area. | simonw wrote: | Different people have different learning and communication | styles. | | Some people learn best from video content. Others (like myself) | would MUCH rather scan through a written tutorial than sit | through a 15 minute video (though thankfully I can watch | YouTube at 2x speed). | | Some people really benefit from interactive exercises. Others | find them to be a waste of time. | | A big challenge in creating a good internal learning culture at | a company is working out how to best address those different | learning styles. | [deleted] | raviisoccupied wrote: | I work in a team with some people who are dyslexic. I've noticed | they don't communicate over written communication as much as some | others, even preferring to create voice recordings or videos to | share their thoughts. I definitely prefer written communication, | but I think neurodiversity is one reason it's tough to make it a | policy. | nvarsj wrote: | This is a very good point. There seem to be a non-trivial | number of dyslexic engineers out there (I've worked with at | least 3-4 over my career), and they struggle a lot to write - | although they'll hide it out of cultural taboo. They tend to | have excellent verbal communication skills though and seem to | handle coding perfectly fine - one of them being one of the | best engineers/mathematicians I've worked with. I wonder how we | can better accommodate it, especially in a remote environment. | SamuelAdams wrote: | > I wonder how we can better accommodate it, especially in a | remote environment. | | Perhaps improving speech-to-text programs will help a lot? | Maybe they can record what they want to document in a | lecture-style way. Give them a white board or paper, set them | up with a good microphone, and get a program that records | their voice to a video / mp3 file. Then process their lecture | through a speech-to-text program and have another team member | format it to match the wiki. That way all the other team | members are doing is light editing of an existing document. | | Now that doesn't fix the issue of the dyslexic team member | having trouble reading. Maybe they can use screen readers | like JAWS to quickly have knowledge bases read to them? That | way it is no different than an in-person phone call? | marvinblum wrote: | > Therefore, I believe it's better to have a tool with good | search functionality rather than investing in having a perfect | information architecture. In the latter case, we're putting up | extra roadblocks for the writer, because then they'll need to | spend extra time figuring out where to put their writing in the | first place. | | This is exactly the reason why we build Emvi [1]. I've worked | with a lot of different tools and none of them really encouraged | people to write stuff down. Not because they weren't easy to get | started with, or the editor was bad. I feel lost in a big | hierarchical structure and was unsure where to put things. I | always had to ask someone where to put a new article or where to | find an existing piece of information. So a powerful search and | focus on writing instead of organizing folders helps a lot. It | still requires discipline and if you want a team to write down as | much as possible, you need to build the culture. But if you don't | feel you're doing something "wrong" in the first place lowers the | barrier. Once you have reached the critical mass of articles and | put some tags on them, you will start to see connections | automatically. Emvi allows you connect everything via mentions | (start typing an @). | | Check out our upcoming user interface [2], it will take this | approach even futher. | | [1] https://emvi.com/ | | [2] https://emvi.com/blog/a-new-experimental-user-interface- | QMZg... | slx26 wrote: | Hey, the cookie policy on your site appears in black text over | a black background on chrome. | sequoia wrote: | Here's what I did on my previous team to encourage writing and | documenting while keeping the barrier low: use the internal/team | blog feature in Confluence. I had a team of 5 so posting to that | blog did not "spam" a lot of people, and you had to watch the | "space" to get notifications at all. | | I encouraged the team to write blog posts on anything they didn't | know and took time to figure out, or if they stepped through a | process for the first time that wasn't already documented, or ran | into some dev VM issue that they fixed. Crucially, I made clear | that a "blog post" could be as little as 1 paragraph and a code | snippet, it didn't have to be big. | | Blogging had the following advantages: 1. No need to think of | "where to put this in the wiki" - just write it in the blog & if | we decide to put it in wiki we can move it later 2. Blog posts | naturally "go away" over time, so it's clear that something | written a year ago might not be current 3. It was regular writing | practice for everyone on the team 4. It allowed others on the | team to learn from someone's experience & improved information | sharing & collaboration 5. If I figured out how to solve some | issue and someone else ran into it, I could say "go look at this | blog post" 6. When we had a new person join the team, during | orientation I'd say "read the last 6 months of blog posts (might | take an hour or two) and that helps them understand the team | culture & norms _way faster_ than they would otherwise 7. It gave | me (team lead) more visibility into what people were doing & | allowed me to step in and help when appropriate. 8. It "forced" | people to structure their thinking & clearly define the problem | they were facing and the solution 9. It allowed people to "get | credit for" work that might otherwise be invisible (e.g. spending | a day debugging some webpack issue or researching options for an | upcoming feature). | | Over a year or so this became a major part of our team's | practices, and there were countless times when someone on or off | our team would say "how do I do X" or "why did you chose to do Y" | and I'd say "good question! Go read this blog post." | | Currently I have google suite instead of confluence and I | seriously miss the blog feature. If someone knows a good, _small_ | , private (not public but easy to share internally) "team blog" | platform, let me know. (I tried blogger but sharing is a pain in | the butt.) | emilecantin wrote: | A simple, dev-centric solution could be simply a Gatsby or | Jekyll blog on a private repo. You can have your team members | clone it & run on their own machine (easy but "hackish"), but I | think it's actually possible to restrict access to team members | on a published GitLab pages. | Viliam1234 wrote: | What are the blog features you actually need? | | If instead you used a wiki (e.g. MediaWiki), with the | convention that all blog articles are prefixed by "YYYY-MM-DD | USERNAME" and linked from the top of the "All Articles" page, | what functionality you want would be missing? | sequoia wrote: | Hm that sounds like a good solution. It's a bit more friction | as I must ask people to make sure they follow a specific | format (and don't forget to add it to the index page!!) | rather than just clicking "new post" button and it doesn't | have a "small team/space" feature like in Confluence, but it | could work. These may seem like very small hurdles, but when | you're asking people to do something they might not do on | their own, every little bit of friction makes it less likely | they'll actually do it, or more likely they'll be frustrated | & resentful if you insist they do it. | | I do like the date metadata & sorting from a blog like | wordpress or confluence: automatic grouping by year, | automatic ordering, as well as features like tags etc. | simonw wrote: | A absolutely love the concept of internal blogging. | | Writing documentation has a barrier to entry: what if I'm | wrong? What if others on my team disagree with how I'm | documenting this? What if I'm on the hook for maintaining this | documentation for the rest of my career? Or what if the | documentation goes out-of-date and ends up causing more harm | than good? | | Blogs solve all of these. If I post an internal blog about how | something works it has three things that fix this: | | 1. It has a date on it. It's clear that it may not still be up- | to-date in a few years time. | | 2. It has my name on it. It's clear that this is my opinion / | my experience at the time, not the official internal position | of the company | | 3. It's a "blog", not documentation - so it's OK if it's | incomplete or inaccurate. | | I ran an internal personal blog at my last employer for this | reason - using Confluence because we already had it, so I | didn't need to introduce a new tool. | | I didn't quite manage to make it stick as a habit for other | engineers - I'd have liked to invest more effort in that. | jillesvangurp wrote: | Written communication is a challenge for some people. Not | everyone is as good of a writer and this skill does not map to | coding skills. In the team I'm currently in, this is definitely a | problem and I notice some people are not used to doing this and | are effectively struggling to be part of the ongoing discussions. | | I've met more than a few engineers that in meetings don't tend to | speak up and in chat channels mostly don't engage. Chat channels | tend to be dominated by the same people that are also dominating | meetings. This is not necessarily a good thing. | | For better or for worse, this causes side channels to pop up and | this is where most of the discussion happens. This is a problem | because it by design excludes people. But it's needed because you | can't speak freely in a channel where everybody in the company | listens in, including management, individuals you don't get along | with, etc. Pretending this is not a problem is not helpful. | | In OSS projects, there's a pattern of frequent contributors to be | disciplined about how they use communication tools. IRC | historically is the place where people discuss in an unmoderated | forum. It's noisy and chaotic and often not pretty. But it's not | necessarily there for documenting decisions. That's what issue | trackers or mailing lists are for. Those tend to have a narrower | scope of what is on and off topic. | | Translating chats into actionable items, or documenting outcomes | of discussions is the key thing to do. The larger the project, | the more obvious this need. | | In a corporate setting, the tools for this are comparatively poor | and not that good for facilitating asynchronous communication. | E.g. Atlassian's tools are pretty popular but not great for async | stuff. IMHO Jira is slow to interact with and this obstructs | effective communication. It's notifications, default settings, | etc. are basically completely wrong and counterproductive. | Absolutely everything requires multiple mouse clicks. IMHO Github | issues is vastly easier to deal with for engineers; it's also | easier to refer to commits and pull requests there. And with | github actions integrated, you also get insight into the status | of CI. Likewise conflucence is a PITA to use compared to managing | markdown files in a git repository or co-authoring a document on | Google docs. Slack is nice but way too noisy for communicating | things unless you have read only channels that are used for | things like announcements. | bwaine wrote: | At my fully remote startup we operate a variation of this that I | think can feel less onerous than a culture of verbose written | communication. | | - We create living documents / whiteboards on Miro (formally | Realtime Board) that relate to the features we're working on. | Things like pictures, architecture diagrams, draft db schemas. | All at WIP stage. | | - When we need to create communications (like requests for | comment, demos etc) we record a short video using Loom. The video | usually centres round some area of the whiteboard or in the IDE. | | - We post this both on a notion page and in slack (using a public | channel as to article suggests), tagging those that need to know | or would find interesting. Keeping a long list of previous videos | in notion helps find useful data later. | | I think the low barrier to entry for recording video over the top | of documentation thats "just good enough" to get the idea across | has lead to universal uptake across our team. It's also easy to | slot in reviewing these videos and responding during natural | breaks in flow. | | For more critical areas of the code / operations we document more | formally towards the end of a feature development cycle. | tomatohs wrote: | I'm building a product that combines screencasting with git, so | you can talk about code as you work and discover it in your git | history. I like how you describe it as "over the top," I think | the biggest advantage is that video can be created _while you | code_ rather than writing which typically occurs _after I 'm | done_. The product is in beta and you can sign up here: | | https://paircast.io | beckingz wrote: | That looks cool! | | How does this compare to livecoding on a streaming platform? | tomatohs wrote: | It integrates with code. The transcript on the right side | is a combination of git diffs and audio transcription which | is generated from your cast. Each git diff automatically | commits to your git repository so you can reference the | video from your git history. | AnonC wrote: | > Based on these stories, you might be determined to demand high | writing standards everywhere, _right off the bat._ | | ...including writing about COVID-19. :) Sorry, couldn't help | cracking a joke after being exposed to so many memes. | | > I believe this is the wrong approach though. Context matters. | In a team of individual contributors, it's crucial to share ideas | early, to iterate and collaborate on them. Not everyone will have | the same level of writing skills. Improving it can take a long | time. Lower the barrier, encourage more writing, and people will | get more practice. | | This requires a feedback loop. It's like writing a program and | being satisfied with it yourself, and then someone points to a | bug or does a code review and points to issues or areas for | improvement. Just lowering the barrier to write without a | respectful feedback loop isn't going to do anyone any good. There | are too many blind spots that writers themselves cannot discover. | | > Where you should enforce high-quality writing is broad or | upwards communication, because there clarity is more important | than speed and ideation. Here too, it's important to keep in mind | that good writing takes time. | | Yes, it does take time. But being able to write well not only | shows the person's ability to write, but also clarity in thought | and an ability to communicate thoughts to others. In a world | where most of the communication, even before COVID-19, is in | written form, it's important to treat every piece that one writes | with care. Mastering a language may not be easy. But showing some | care while writing is within the reach of many people who need to | convey their thoughts to others. | stlark wrote: | Prior to quarantine, I had never heard of the concept of async | communication. It felt like a fancy way of just saying "document | more". Now that my whole department is WFH we've tried using | Notion as our central repository of information. I don't think it | lands every single feature described in the write up (e.g. search | could be better), but, it has enough features to create write-ups | and RFCs that are visually appealing to help get the point | across. | | We still hop on a quick Zoom 1:1 if we can't find the words to | discuss over text. | wenc wrote: | To build on this -- for me async communications means not | having to jump on so many meetings, and being able to | organize/prioritize/delay stuff to respond to and batch them. | | Email is the quintessential async tool. Slack isn't really even | that async -- people still expect quick responses (it somehow | has that expectation built-in) | | For individual contributors, sync meetings really disrupt the | flow of the day. Worse are meetings that don't respect your | time zone -- either too early in the morning or too late at | night. | | People don't realize how disruptive it is when someone says | "let's jump on a call" for every single little thing. I much | prefer them to just "send me an email". | | Sometimes sync meetings are more efficient, especially for | complex topics or on topics requiring a live demo -- but I find | having a sync meeting after an email thread much more | effective, because then folks have had a chance to engage with | the material. | KineticLensman wrote: | I spent several years of my life reviewing corporate documents in | an independent assurance role at a large company in the UK. The | documents were a mix of bids and research reports intended for | external use and internal docs associated with our sales/project | process. I raised several concerns about our writing process to | management and spent many long hours fixing docs at the last | minute. But my concerns didn't get much traction with management. | | One day, I discovered that our document identifier issuing system | (yes, we had one!) could tell you how many docs had been | registered by a particular teams in a given time period. This led | me to the finding that our department created a new document | something like every 58 minutes of a working year! We weren't a | software project group, we were in fact a document authoring | function that also emitted software and research as a side | effect. That observation got some traction with management, and I | was funded to develop some how-to-write guidelines for document | authors. Bid teams were particularly interested because the cost | of document production in bid development often fell directly to | the company, not to the eventual customers. | | In addition to providing a basic 'house' style for authors, the | guidelines also highlighted the importance of easy-to-use doc | templates and training for lead authors (e.g. those collating | docs produced by multiple people, sometimes by sub-contractors). | dreen wrote: | I've started working on a Q&A site that parses Slack logs and | creates a thread on the site based on me asking people on Slack | on how to do different things in our system. The problem with | Wikis is friction. I'm hoping that reducing this to copy, paste | and click OK will help. | dpeck wrote: | Be aware that going towards a document heavy culture doesn't make | the smarmy types any less smarmy, it just changes how it is | manifested. | | You'll still have those who use the "can we get on a call and | discuss" trick so that no decision or todo item for them is seen | in a public channel. | | There will be those why try to kill a conversation in a channel | by replying in a thread. | | Often you'll see the thread reply too when its the poor employees | answering a question hours/days later and then they'll point to | it as giving $teammate all the info they need. | | And the ever-present "oh, its in the | wiki/knowledgebase/faq/whatever" but links are never sent, nor is | anything ever actually there. | | All in all it a different medium, but most of the same kind of | team dysfunctions continue to exist just fine, and if anything it | is tougher to spot them. | bryanmgreen wrote: | Written communication is simply an extension of overall | communication. | | If communication is only encouraged as a tool to transfer the | needs of an executive to teams and then individual contributors, | it will wither and die. | | To improve written communication, you must improve the culture | first. | Spooky23 wrote: | I've worked in places where everything is in email. That's become | less common as email discoverability in court has become a thing. | It wasn't some magical paradise. | | As with all things, there are no absolutes. Don't blame tools for | broken process. End of the day, you need to have a common process | to debate, make, and memorialize decisions. | Avicebron wrote: | Encouraging a culture of people who now have to work in a cover | their ass territory...welcome | [deleted] ___________________________________________________________________ (page generated 2020-05-11 23:00 UTC)