net_lit.txt:10: Computers and the Net are the future, without mastery of these tools of the Information Age our children, and ourselves, [will -> (shall is sometimes used with first person pronouns and the future tense. It expresses something you believe will happen, not something that you are determined to do. A drowning man shouts: "I shall drown, no one will save me!")] not [be able to -> (weak definition)] compete for jobs or comfortable lifestyles in the coming decade.

net_lit.txt:14: Net Literacy is a basic right, it should be guaranteed for all citizens by the [state -> (if used as a verb, restrict to the meaning of "express fully or clearly")], just [like -> Substitute by "as" before phrases or clauses: Our love was beautiful, as love was meant to be.] reading, writing, and arithmetic [currently -> Often redundant: This program is currently checking your document.] are in our schools.

net_lit.txt:16: We don't rely solely on private sources to teach our children, we provide public [state -> (if used as a verb, restrict to the meaning of "express fully or clearly")]-sponsored schools so that all, regardless of their economic status, [can -> (do not confuse with "may")] attend.

net_lit.txt:18: [So -> (do not use as intensifier)] why allow our children to fail to learn about the Net?

net_lit.txt:21: [Only -> Put "only" right before the word it modifies.] [one -> When used as a pronoun, it  must be used consistently: One must manage one's money carefully.] out of 73 [of -> Double word.] our school children have regular access to computers in school and there aren't enough net-literate teachers to help them learn about the Net.

net_lit.txt:23: [Only -> Put "only" right before the word it modifies.] about 40% of homes in the US.

net_lit.txt:25: [There are -> (a dead phrase; rewrite the sentence and it will probably improve)] several ways we [can -> (do not confuse with "may")] help.

net_lit.txt:25: We [can -> (do not confuse with "may")] support the schools in getting the computers, and teachers, [they -> (do not use as substitute for "each, each one, everybody, every one, anybody, any one, somebody, some one")] need to get the job done by increasing and earmarking funding and we [can -> (do not confuse with "may")] donate computers and money to agencies [like -> Substitute by "as" before phrases or clauses: Our love was beautiful, as love was meant to be.] P.A.C.K. [which -> (use "that" if clause is restrictive)] are trying to setup after school programs for kids.

net_lit.txt:34: If the County [can -> (do not confuse with "may")]'t find the money or staff to bring our library into the Information Age we must do it ourselves.

net_lit.txt:35: How about [one -> When used as a pronoun, it  must be used consistently: One must manage one's money carefully.] of our local organizations [like -> Substitute by "as" before phrases or clauses: Our love was beautiful, as love was meant to be.] the Lions or the Middletown Luncheon Club taking the library under [it's -> = "it is" or "its"?] wing and getting donations of a computer and some funding to get it on the Net where we [will -> (shall is sometimes used with first person pronouns and the future tense. It expresses something you believe will happen, not something that you are determined to do. A drowning man shouts: "I shall drown, no one will save me!")] have access to big-city newspapers, periodicals, museums, universities, federal, [state -> (if used as a verb, restrict to the meaning of "express fully or clearly")] and local government, and other libraries.

net_lit.txt:42: I [will -> (shall is sometimes used with first person pronouns and the future tense. It expresses something you believe will happen, not something that you are determined to do. A drowning man shouts: "I shall drown, no one will save me!")] donate my time and technical knowledge to help refurbish any donated equipment and to help train staff and volunteers to use that equipment - just call me at 987-9484.

25 phrases in 18 sentences found.